How to use gender-neutral pronouns in your writing

Using they/them/their to refer to a person who's non-binary or where you don't know the gender

July 14 is International Non-Binary People’s Day, the perfect time to talk about the correct use of gender-neutral pronouns. First off, we’re talking about personal pronouns (they/them/their). By correct, we mean correct grammar and usage. In English, it’s relatively simple to refer to people in a gender-neutral way, unlike in many other languages, by using they/them/their.

Using they/them/their in the singular has actually been accepted usage since modern English evolved from Middle English. Look up centuries-old newspaper articles about “persons unknown” and you’ll find plenty of examples of the singular use of “they” as in “the thief entered the residence through the kitchen window. They went through the house room by room.” Literary history, too, is littered with examples of the use of they/them/their in the singular. Merriam-Webster quotes William Shakespeare, Jane Austen, E.L. Doctorow, W.H. Auden, W.M. Thackeray, to name a few big ones.

 

THE SINGULAR “THEY”

We’re all familiar with the use of “they” and its various forms to refer to more than one person or a group of people, vague or specific (as in “you know what they say” or “the second-graders will hand in their assignments next week”). Especially if you’re speaking English as a second language, you may be less familiar with the use of “they” to refer to a single person, either unknown and therefore gender-neutral (“If a student would like to register, they can do so via our website”) or known and non-binary or gender-fluid  (“Rene felt a dull pain in their left foot”).

Traditionally, “he” was the preferred pronoun in formal contexts for a person whose gender the writer didn’t know, much like we used “mankind” and “man” to describe all of humanity. In recent times, many writers defaulted to “she” instead. Nowadays, MLA, APA, Associated Press and the Chicago Manual of Style actively advise academics, journalists and other professsional writers to use the singular form of they/them.

Here are some examples of the singular use of “they” pronouns forms from the APA style guide:

They: “Casey is a gender-fluid person. They are from Texas and enjoy tacos.”
Them: “Every client got a care package delivered to them.”
Their: “Each child played with their parent.”
Theirs: “The cup of coffee is theirs.”
Themselves/themself: “A private person usually keeps to themself.”

Both “themselves” and “themself” are grammatically correct when used to refer to only one person, despite what your autocorrect or grammar checker may say. Using themself is a great way to help your reader differentiate between a group and a singular person in stories about non-binary characters.

 

CONTEXT IS EVERYTHING

When we use third-person pronouns such as “he,” “she,” and “they,” readers need context to know to whom the pronoun is referring. The sentence or clause preceding the appearance of each pronoun usually provides that context. Grammatically, “he” and “she” refer back to the last person of that gender referenced in the text.

When you’re writing about non-binary characters, the same basic rule applies but you may need to take extra care that readers understand from the context that you are using “they” in the singular. For example, in the sentence, “He threw the ball. She caught it. They played catch for hours,” it’s clear that “they” refers to the two people throwing the ball. What about “He threw the ball. She caught it. Izzy wanted to join. They could happily play catch for hours.” Here, although Izzy is the last character referenced, we could take “they” to refer to the group. If you want to be clear, it’s better to reword the sentence, for example, “He threw the ball. She caught it. Izzy, who could happily play catch for hours, wanted to join.”

 

WHAT ABOUT SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT?

Use a plural verb form with the singular pronoun “they” (i.e., write “they are” not “they is”). For example, “They are the best doctor I’ve ever had.” These types of sentence constructions, although correct, can sound a little clunky, so you may want to use a name instead of a pronoun.

It’s likely that in time, the language evolve to include new singular third-person pronouns such as ve/ver/vis or ey/em/eir, to help us differentiate from the plural usage. For now, we can keep using they/them/their in the singular as the simplest and most inclusive option.

8 July 2022

4 responses on "How to use gender-neutral pronouns in your writing"

  1. Will have to study this carefully, I still do not get it

  2. This is a nice summary, and thanks for the citations that back up this writing form. I will share it with colleagues if needed. For me, it’s pretty simple, and more elegant than writing “he/she,” which we did five years ago to be gender neutral. “They” was just being introduced then to be inclusive when the biological sex or gender of the subject was not known. It seems like “They” is here to stay for gender neutral writing.

  3. Tbh I don’t know how you would write an interaction between three non binary people. It would be a grammatical nightmare to me.
    Abel thew the ball and Cleo caught it. They enjoyed the impact in their glove. Florence spectated in the lot as they sipped on their lemonade. Abel was flustered with how they felt their pitching was not improving.

    Feel like need a new word created for literature tbh.

  4. J. A. Vold (I/me,you)3 June 2023 at 05:12Reply

    Pronouns

    My language allows me
    to try to define you
    With so many words,
    more than I’ll ever know
    Or understand.

    My interest compels me
    To try to describe you
    From different angles
    Above and below,
    And now and then

    By license or laziness
    I will reduce you
    To simpler terms.
    I will fail to show
    Or comprehend

    How simple you want to be,
    gendered or pluraled
    Or rendered and labeled,
    And somehow presented.
    Allow me, though,
    To flounder when

    I turn to the pronouns
    And try to shorthand you
    When you’re the third person
    I’ll never know
    Or understand.

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